Term 4 Week 2
In Morris class we are learning to describe a moment in time. Our image was a beautiful illustration taken from a book. We are not sure about copyright so we cannot include it in this post. You will have to use your imagination from the description written by Brooklyn!
FISHING WITH MUM
One day on the beach there was a boy who was nine years old.He had black hair and brown skin.His mum looked like the boy.The mum had a shark necklace.She looked like she was going somewhere.She had a look of excitement and surprise.
The sea shone like the sun.The boy was holding two fish.His mum looked` as if it was her special day.The fish were fresh to eat.They were standing on the hot hot sand.Do you like fish?I think they like fish.I wonder what they are going to catch next!
By Brooklyn
Hi Brooklyn. I really enjoyed reading your story about the mum and boy fishing. I like the adjectives you used when describing the sand. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Well done. From mum.
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