Term 4 Week 2  

In Morris class we are learning to describe a moment in time. Our image was a beautiful illustration taken from a book. We are not sure about copyright so we cannot include it in this post. You will have to use your imagination from the description written by Brooklyn!    

FISHING WITH MUM

One day on the beach there was a boy who was nine years old.He had black hair and brown skin.His mum looked like the boy.The mum had a shark necklace.She looked like she was going somewhere.She had a look of excitement and surprise.

The sea shone like the sun.The boy was holding two fish.His mum looked` as if it was her special day.The fish were fresh to eat.They were standing on the hot hot sand.Do you like fish?I think they like fish.I wonder what they are going to catch next!

By Brooklyn

Writing - including a plan!

TERM 4 Week 1

This recount was written by Stephen. He has a simple plan which he has written on his Chromebook to guide him. The highlighted parts are his self assessment to show where he elaborated and added some more information. I think its a great example of someone being clear about their learning. Would you like to give him some feedback?

B.pools,deep.shallow,incredible,uncle's,family,aunty,cousins

M.fun,playing,games,diving,laughing

E.ate food,back home,wish,again

The incredible pools  

Last week on Thursday my family,uncles,aunties, cousins and I went to the pools.There were two pools.One was deep and one was shallow.It was incredible!

When we went inside the pool,it was very,very loud!but we had fun.when we’ve  been playing games. we were laughing loud like a clown.Then we were diving in the inside the pool.we were sliding down the water slide.After that I said “this is so fun and so incredible!

Then we ate fish and chips and we drank water because we were very,very hungry and thirsty.After a while we went back home and played board games.  I said I wish we could go there again.

From Stephen

Holiday fun in Auckland

 Term 4 Week 1 

In the holidays my dad and my brother and I went to Victoria Park.

I grabbed my scooter.I saw big ramps and a tall ramp.I was so excited to do tricks! Joseph and I rode around the scooter park.I was so,so fast.The wind blew through  me like a giant tornado.

It was fantastic at Victoria Park because I did a 380 pipe,and I went down the ramp super fast!Joseph and I did a 180 pipe. It means the scooter goes under your legs.And goes over your head and  you land.When I was practising my moves I did a 360 slide bar!A 360 slide bar is when you do a 360 in the air and land on the bar and slide down in the bottom of your scooter.

When we were  done playing at Victoria Park we had to go back home.When we were at home it was so much fun. I thought it was incredible.Joseph and I were so,so tired.I took a drink and rested.

Raden

Holiday fun in Auckland

 Term 4 Week 1 

In the holidays my dad and my brother and I went to Victoria Park.

I grabbed my scooter.I saw big ramps and a tall ramp.I was so excited to do tricks! Joseph and I rode around the scooter park.I was so,so fast.The wind blew through  me like a giant tornado.

It was fantastic at Victoria Park because I did a 380 pipe,and I went down the ramp super fast!Joseph and I did a 180 pipe. It means the scooter goes under your legs.And goes over your head and  you land.When I was practising my moves I did a 360 slide bar!A 360 slide bar is when you do a 360 in the air and land on the bar and slide down in the bottom of your scooter.

When we were  done playing at Victoria Park we had to go back home.When we were at home it was so much fun. I thought it was incredible.Joseph and I were so,so tired.I took a drink and rested.

Raden