TERM 4 Week 1
This recount was written by Stephen. He has a simple plan which he has written on his Chromebook to guide him. The highlighted parts are his self assessment to show where he elaborated and added some more information. I think its a great example of someone being clear about their learning. Would you like to give him some feedback?
B.pools,deep.shallow,incredible,uncle's,family,aunty,cousins
M.fun,playing,games,diving,laughing
E.ate food,back home,wish,again
The incredible pools
Last week on Thursday my family,uncles,aunties, cousins and I went to the pools.There were two pools.One was deep and one was shallow.It was incredible!
When we went inside the pool,it was very,very loud!but we had fun.when we’ve been playing games. we were laughing loud like a clown.Then we were diving in the inside the pool.we were sliding down the water slide.After that I said “this is so fun and so incredible!
Then we ate fish and chips and we drank water because we were very,very hungry and thirsty.After a while we went back home and played board games. I said I wish we could go there again.
From Stephen
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